Need corrections made to my paper

Need corrections made to an essay.

Follow the guidance of your peer editor: work on punctuation and sentence structure. As well, your conclusion brings up a new issue and it should not do that. In fact, your conclusion seems to be more the counter argument than the conclusion. Recall, over-viewing the counterargument is good, but you must conclude with the “so what” of what you’ve provided in your own argument. So, first, determine your argument/position (this is your thesis), which isn’t just about showing the effects, but also about who cares? An appropriate thesis, might be this: Measures have been taken to address security at airports and those measures are good for all of us.
This way, you have a guide to where you will go in your conclusion.

Please dont change the essay around completely