Reflection on Instructor Feedback

Please review the feedback I left you carefully. In order to receive the full 5 extra credit points, you must make a checklist of 3-5 things you can work on andwhy when preparing Sunday’s final draft. Your reflection must be 100-200 words. Please submit an MLA-formatted document with your word count as a 5th line in the heading. Use a .doc, .docx, or .pdf file format. Make sure you are using complete sentences, though bullet points or numbering is acceptable.

Here are the three most pressing things to work on for your final draft:

-Aim for an introduction, 3-5 body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Right now, you have too many paragraph breaks and should not be labeling any of your sections.

-You need 4-6 current and credible sources. Right now, your sources are not credible. Review the “Researching Credible Sources” handout for more clarification on this. Avoid web sites.

-All sources should be quoted or paraphrased in text and those references should be green. I need to be able to tell the difference between your ideas and the ones from your sources.