Grief Draft Essay

I have already finished all the paragraphs and works cited. I just need you to go over it and make sure everything is in order and arrange the paper correctly. You may have to write the conclusion paragraph over and the introduction, but everything else should be fine. If not feel free to correct it. This is only the draft and I need it by tomorrow but I am allowing 2 days since it is last minute. The essay is in the file “Grief Draft Essay”.

Post your completed research paper using the Research Paper Rubric and Research Paper Final Evaluation Form as guides

Included enough information to support your assertions. The facts and figures you cited do a good job explaining and detailing the different experiences. However, it’s important that you cite at the END of quotations or paraphrases but enclosing the page numbers in parentheses. I would also like to see, as you begin constructing your last few body paragraphs, clearer transitions between ideas. Try to slow down and explain everything fully so that we as readers can understand how your information relates to both the topic sentences and also your thesis. Be sure to introduce your authors before you quote or paraphrase them, even if you’ve just mentioned them. You should include their full names and credentials if you haven’t mentioned them before. Simplify and shorten your sentences, and work on using punctuation like colons to introduce your quoted material. Proofread, too, for spelling, capitalization, and punctuation!